Friday, May 22, 2009
A Redesign of My Face Painting Site
I'm working on a redesign of my site to advertise face painting services. I've got a preliminary draft I did in Photoshop. I would really, really love to hear any critique. (Obviously, I haven't written the final copy in there, yet.)
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I like that the splashed paint matches your face, and that painted smile is a great image. The text in the upper corner looks a little off; maybe the curve doesn't match the lines of the other frames in the picture? You know, I also like the copy you have now, other than the Cicero fragment (especially the "hey, hey, hey"). It could just use a little something ...
ReplyDelete- You're gonna be in a great mood all day.
- Watch this. You're gonna love my paints.
- Stop having a boring face. Stop having a boring life.
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- F.A.R. out